It's finally out to post. It seems to be taking extra long for SOL to post it so be patient.
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Monday, February 19, 2007
Wednesday, February 14, 2007
Complaints
If any readers have a problem with an aspect of my story, I don't mind hearing from you about it. I learn that way. I have however, received an email that was crafted to try to insult my ability at writing.
This person was evidentially expecting some great literary work, when all I ever intended is a nice stroke story. If you like my story, please tell me. If you see a problem in grammar or spelling, or even some inconsistancy, please email me with it.
If however you just want to send an insult or trash my story because it isn't what you want, please just stop reading and don't bother me. If you must email me with it, at least point me to your finely crafted literary masterpiece. Otherwise keep it to yourself.
I don't mind criticism, I just don't like folks using that moniker to try to make others feel like shit.
Salute!
Rant over!
This person was evidentially expecting some great literary work, when all I ever intended is a nice stroke story. If you like my story, please tell me. If you see a problem in grammar or spelling, or even some inconsistancy, please email me with it.
If however you just want to send an insult or trash my story because it isn't what you want, please just stop reading and don't bother me. If you must email me with it, at least point me to your finely crafted literary masterpiece. Otherwise keep it to yourself.
I don't mind criticism, I just don't like folks using that moniker to try to make others feel like shit.
Salute!
Rant over!
Tuesday, February 13, 2007
New Chapters Out
I just sent in Chapters 29 and 30. Hope you enjoy them. As always, I probably missed some spelling or grammatical errors. Please be kind and point them out to me. I need a quote and chapter as well as your correction. Thanks all.
I know some will complain about yet another character introduced into the story. Well she just happened to show up while I was writing. Remember I am just a typist here. The characters are in charge. Any complaints can be emailed to Sheri. You can get her email address from Chrissie. Be aware that Sheri likes to send nude pics of herself. You have been warned. Like you'd complain.
Salute!
I know some will complain about yet another character introduced into the story. Well she just happened to show up while I was writing. Remember I am just a typist here. The characters are in charge. Any complaints can be emailed to Sheri. You can get her email address from Chrissie. Be aware that Sheri likes to send nude pics of herself. You have been warned. Like you'd complain.
Salute!
Saturday, February 10, 2007
Detail Details Details
So far I would say 99% of the readers have shown that they love my story. Until now, the only complaints are that it doesn't cum ...err, come fast enough, and that Bill should be the only one to get the girls. I have gotten a complaint about the level of detail I use. I will explain here why I do that.
First off, as a new writer I am still learning how to write. If I were writing a mainstream novel, I would suck. As a writer of erotica, I still suck, but I'm learning. The way this story is coming to me is like watching a TV show. I see the scene in my head and I write about it.
The level of detail I use is to get the reader to see what I do. When Bill places his hand on a breast, he feels it, so I detail that feeling. If he is getting ready to drive the RV, he has a routine he has to do before he can move it. Sure I could skip all that and let you, the reader assume that he did all of that, but in a day to day story such as this, we all do repetitive mundane things. That's life.
I hate to lose readers for any reason, but I like showing the details even though they may be tedious at times. If you don't like that, just skip to the sex parts if that is all you want out of a story. I confess I have done it while reading a few stories myself.
Sorry for the rant, I just feel the need to explain.
Salute!
First off, as a new writer I am still learning how to write. If I were writing a mainstream novel, I would suck. As a writer of erotica, I still suck, but I'm learning. The way this story is coming to me is like watching a TV show. I see the scene in my head and I write about it.
The level of detail I use is to get the reader to see what I do. When Bill places his hand on a breast, he feels it, so I detail that feeling. If he is getting ready to drive the RV, he has a routine he has to do before he can move it. Sure I could skip all that and let you, the reader assume that he did all of that, but in a day to day story such as this, we all do repetitive mundane things. That's life.
I hate to lose readers for any reason, but I like showing the details even though they may be tedious at times. If you don't like that, just skip to the sex parts if that is all you want out of a story. I confess I have done it while reading a few stories myself.
Sorry for the rant, I just feel the need to explain.
Salute!
Thursday, February 8, 2007
Chapter 28
I will try to get Ch 28 out before the weekend. I've had no real time to write. That, and the fact that I was still not sure what to write. I guess an explanation is order on how I write.
I don't have any kind of plan or outline set up in this story. I write it as I see it. The last two chapters are a good example. The whole weekend had passed before it came to me how to approach the birthday party. It was late Sunday night before I started writing it. I had to finish it up Monday for publication. This chapter is going to be the same way. I tried to force it by just starting to write, but that didn't work. I think it is starting to flow again in my head, so I will try again tonight.
Salute!
I don't have any kind of plan or outline set up in this story. I write it as I see it. The last two chapters are a good example. The whole weekend had passed before it came to me how to approach the birthday party. It was late Sunday night before I started writing it. I had to finish it up Monday for publication. This chapter is going to be the same way. I tried to force it by just starting to write, but that didn't work. I think it is starting to flow again in my head, so I will try again tonight.
Salute!
Tuesday, February 6, 2007
Chapters 26-27
I find that smaller chapters are easier to handle thus I split this one in two. All through the weekend I had no clue what I wanted to do about the next chapter. I did know I wanted to have Niki and Sheri's birthday, yet the details eluded me. Sunday night at about 9pm I say down and the scene opened up to me and I wrote. I put down about a third of it before heading to bed. Monday was a dead workday so I wrote all day to hammer out what you have read. An hour for a quick once over and posted it. I hope you all enjoyed it. Now they will hopefully get back on the damn road!
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