Sorry for the delay on Ch 24. I wrote myself into a corner and have to rethink some things so this chapter will be delayed. I will try to get it up as soon as possible.
I make this promise that I will not abandon this story. I have read many great stories to only find they were never finished. I hate that. This one will be complete.
Wednesday, January 31, 2007
Monday, January 29, 2007
Chapter 23
As you may have seen at the end of chapter 23, it is dedicated to Gia1978. Even though she didn't show as much as most would like in her blog picture, what she did show is fabulous. I for one am inspired.
Salute!
Salute!
Saturday, January 27, 2007
Rewrite
Just did a rewrite of the first 6 chapters. Made corrections that I could find. If anyone sees anything I missed please quote it and tell me. Files have been submitted for posting.
Salute
Salute
Sirloin Tip Roast
This is how I make it:
I get my roast from Wal-mart. I am not sure of the brand, just make sure it says Sirloin Tip.
Salt and spice to taste. Just make sure not to overdo the salt. The spice I use is called Carnival Seasons. It is made by the folks at Tony Chachere's. You can find the website here: http://www.tonychachere.com/ Any spice like Tony's is fine.
I use a Magnalite oval pot. sort of like a dutch oven. I pour some canola oil on the bottom. Maybe about 1/4 cup or less depending on the size of the roast. After the meat is spiced you roll it in the oil and place the pot cover on it.
Put it in the oven at about 375 degrees. I flip it every 45 minutes or so. Keep doing this until it turns dark, almost black. You will see a dark tar like residue on the sides of the pot. This can take a few hours depending on the oven. Chop up a large onion and put aside. When meat is dark as stated before, take it out of the oven and place it on the stove top at a medium heat. Pour in the chopped onions and sautéed them until they are wilted.
Add water to make a gravy. I usually start with about 1 1/2 cups of water and let it simmer, add more as needed. You can add some Kitchen Bouquet to it to darken if needed. The tar will melt into the water to make the gravy. I know that in certain parts of the country folks don't eat rice with gravy on it, but I do.
Hope you enjoy it as much as I do. If you have any questions email me.
I get my roast from Wal-mart. I am not sure of the brand, just make sure it says Sirloin Tip.
Salt and spice to taste. Just make sure not to overdo the salt. The spice I use is called Carnival Seasons. It is made by the folks at Tony Chachere's. You can find the website here: http://www.tonychachere.com/ Any spice like Tony's is fine.
I use a Magnalite oval pot. sort of like a dutch oven. I pour some canola oil on the bottom. Maybe about 1/4 cup or less depending on the size of the roast. After the meat is spiced you roll it in the oil and place the pot cover on it.
Put it in the oven at about 375 degrees. I flip it every 45 minutes or so. Keep doing this until it turns dark, almost black. You will see a dark tar like residue on the sides of the pot. This can take a few hours depending on the oven. Chop up a large onion and put aside. When meat is dark as stated before, take it out of the oven and place it on the stove top at a medium heat. Pour in the chopped onions and sautéed them until they are wilted.
Add water to make a gravy. I usually start with about 1 1/2 cups of water and let it simmer, add more as needed. You can add some Kitchen Bouquet to it to darken if needed. The tar will melt into the water to make the gravy. I know that in certain parts of the country folks don't eat rice with gravy on it, but I do.
Hope you enjoy it as much as I do. If you have any questions email me.
Friday, January 26, 2007
Loss of readers
I have had a few readers state that they will no longer be reading my story. This, I am sorry to hear. The reasons all seem to be the same though, and that is what confuses me. I am trying to keep this story interesting in that there is a lot of sex between Bill and the women, yet he can't be the only one that the girls are interested in. Matt should be able to have some fun with the young stuff as well.
It's only natural that the younger kids feel some attraction to each other, and as such I am trying to avoid the formula incest storyline. Yes this is a story about an older guy in his RV who meets a family of women, yet it would seem to be following a standard formula to have him be the only one that gets all the girls. There has to be at least a bit of reality here.
There are stories out there that are like that. Hell, I like to read those too. It's just that I would like to have a more rounded tale. Have more character interaction. I hope that those that have stopped reading will come back to Bill and his story, but if not, oh well.
Salute!
It's only natural that the younger kids feel some attraction to each other, and as such I am trying to avoid the formula incest storyline. Yes this is a story about an older guy in his RV who meets a family of women, yet it would seem to be following a standard formula to have him be the only one that gets all the girls. There has to be at least a bit of reality here.
There are stories out there that are like that. Hell, I like to read those too. It's just that I would like to have a more rounded tale. Have more character interaction. I hope that those that have stopped reading will come back to Bill and his story, but if not, oh well.
Salute!
Chapter 21
Just sent it in to be posted. This one wound up just a little short, but I kind of liked where it ended. Enjoy. Chapter 22 will more than likely be up before the weekend is out.
Thursday, January 25, 2007
Requests by readers
I had received quite a few requests for water sports to be included in this story. It almost felt out of place in the shower scene. I may rewrite that chapter and omit the WS aspect. I think I have hit on that particular fetish enough for now. I will try to incorporate what I can of reader requests, if it isn't too far out there. Another request I've had, was for everyone to get pregnant. This is too far outside the scope of the story as it will more than likely not extend that far in the future. I may end the story leaving a possible opening for a sequel, we shall see.
Salute!
Salute!
Sunday, January 14, 2007
Michelle
This is one of the standard figures in Poser 6, but she makes a great Michelle for the story
Saturday, January 13, 2007
Bill
This is as close as I can get using Poser 6 to what I think Bill looks like. Will post the others as I do them.
Friday, January 12, 2007
Repost
Chapter 9 was reposted to correct a few minor things I saw. If anyone see's an obvious mistake in any chapter please email me with the chapter and paragraph along with what you see wrong. I will fix it and repost.
Thursday, January 11, 2007
Chapter 11
Just sent it in. Should be out for reading soon. Let me know if you all like the pace and how it is going so far.
Wednesday, January 10, 2007
Concerns about Chapter 10
I have received a few comments via email about the rape and murder mentioned when the story was centered on the Justice brothers. This was only intended to show how bad they are. I have no intention of expanding on what had occurred to the poor girl Ray had killed. I also am not going to detail any violence except for the confrontations that will occur when the Justice brothers get theirs. That will be the end of any violent part of the story.
I guess some background on Randy and his brother can be shown here. I was never going to explain this part in the story. In my head when I was trying to figure out Randy and his brother and why they were bad, I decided that their overbearing father had abused them. That, and not having a sympathetic ear from their mother, made it worse. I figured that Randy may have been beaten by him and caused his anger issues. No love from his mother caused him to hate women and treat them the way he did. This as I say was only in my head to allow me to figure him out before I added him to the story. Ray on the other hand was just a bad apple all around, he could do no wrong in his mother's eyes, thus he had her support for Sheriff and for Mayor. Bottom line is they are bad guys and some mention of what they did to be the bad guys was necessary.
I hope this clears up any concerns you have about this turning into a rape, murder story. It is not going to.
I guess some background on Randy and his brother can be shown here. I was never going to explain this part in the story. In my head when I was trying to figure out Randy and his brother and why they were bad, I decided that their overbearing father had abused them. That, and not having a sympathetic ear from their mother, made it worse. I figured that Randy may have been beaten by him and caused his anger issues. No love from his mother caused him to hate women and treat them the way he did. This as I say was only in my head to allow me to figure him out before I added him to the story. Ray on the other hand was just a bad apple all around, he could do no wrong in his mother's eyes, thus he had her support for Sheriff and for Mayor. Bottom line is they are bad guys and some mention of what they did to be the bad guys was necessary.
I hope this clears up any concerns you have about this turning into a rape, murder story. It is not going to.
May be putting faces to the characters.
I have a program called Poser 6. It is a 3D animation type program. I may post pics of what I think the characters look like here. No they won't be naked. It will be just head or upper body shots, if I do it. If I can get the 3D figure in one of the pics of the RV that would be even better.
Tuesday, January 9, 2007
Chapter 10
It has been sent. This chapter spends some time with the Justice brothers. There are elements that I describe I am not going to expand on. Forcable rape, murder, and torture. These are for background only.
This story seems to be writing itself. I sit in front of the computer to write and it is almost like watching TV with editing capabilities. I see it as I type. I don't know where it is going but I can't wait to get there.
Salute!
This story seems to be writing itself. I sit in front of the computer to write and it is almost like watching TV with editing capabilities. I see it as I type. I don't know where it is going but I can't wait to get there.
Salute!
Monday, January 8, 2007
What would you like to see?
This is for you the readers to post your thoughts about where you would like to see the story go. Perhaps some ideas on a character's development. Click on "comments" below this post and you can let us all know.
Where is it all going?
Some of the email I have received has asked as well as speculated on where I am going to go with this story. I have no idea, I just see the story unfold as I write. I type too fast to really take the time to see mistakes, so I have to go back several times to fix or change things.
I want to have Randy and his brother appear later. Obviously Beth and her son have entered the story, not sure where it is going yet, probably where you think. Not sure yet about her husband. This last chapter turned out just a little short due to my having to delete an entire section. I had gone in a direction I had changed my mind on. I found that after I had written about 1200 words, that Michelle was acting like a sex slave in waiting. I was reading an excellent story about that subject and was influenced.
There have been some requests for certain things to happen, as well as requests for certain character interactions. I am trying to incorporate a few of them so stay tuned.
I am hoping that some dialog will start among the readers using the comments section of this blog. Please feel free to post comments folks, that is why I set this up. I will have a post following this one to start that I hope.
Salute!
I want to have Randy and his brother appear later. Obviously Beth and her son have entered the story, not sure where it is going yet, probably where you think. Not sure yet about her husband. This last chapter turned out just a little short due to my having to delete an entire section. I had gone in a direction I had changed my mind on. I found that after I had written about 1200 words, that Michelle was acting like a sex slave in waiting. I was reading an excellent story about that subject and was influenced.
There have been some requests for certain things to happen, as well as requests for certain character interactions. I am trying to incorporate a few of them so stay tuned.
I am hoping that some dialog will start among the readers using the comments section of this blog. Please feel free to post comments folks, that is why I set this up. I will have a post following this one to start that I hope.
Salute!
Sunday, January 7, 2007
Chapter 9
I have just submitted it. Should be up soon. This one is a little shorter. I did not have time to get too much further and a good place to stop showed up.
Enjoy!
Enjoy!
Saturday, January 6, 2007
Chapter 8
Just submitted, it should be up soon. I have delved into Michelle's sister's life a little as she and her family will be a part of this story.
Thursday, January 4, 2007
Editing
I do my own editing and proofreading. I also see I miss a lot of things. I may start using the services of a proofreader and editor. This I know will probably slow down submissions. I do want to get better at writing and add more to this story, as well as write others.
Chapter 7
Chapter 7 has been submitted, it should be up in a few minutes! Enjoy! I may do a few chapters this weekend.
Wednesday, January 3, 2007
Re-write
I have completed re-writing the first 5 chapters of the story. This was to correct obvious misspelling, as well as the trouble I have with past tense and present tense writing. Small changes are also there to help the flow and enhance a few scenes. I will re-post it soon.
Even though I did the re-write, I still have written most of another chapter. I am going to try to keep them about the same length as chapter 5. I am almost there, so you should see an update this weekend or before.
Even though I did the re-write, I still have written most of another chapter. I am going to try to keep them about the same length as chapter 5. I am almost there, so you should see an update this weekend or before.
Tuesday, January 2, 2007
The RV in Good Times Rolling
The RV is a Travel Supreme motorized Select Limited, I used floor plan 45SL24 for the layout I use to plan the interior action of the story. You can link directly here:
http://www.travelsupreme.com/product_page.php?product=10
From here you can select gallery to see pictures I use for reference. Select floor plans and scroll down until you see 45SL24. for the layout.
I hope this helps you to visualize a little better as the story progresses. Much of it will happen in the RV.
http://www.travelsupreme.com/product_page.php?product=10
From here you can select gallery to see pictures I use for reference. Select floor plans and scroll down until you see 45SL24. for the layout.
I hope this helps you to visualize a little better as the story progresses. Much of it will happen in the RV.
Annonymous posters
I will no longer accept annonymous posts. I have had some great feedback but have no way to reply. So If you have some good feedback please post it on this blog or get a yahoo or gmail email account so I can reply.
Good Times Rolling
This is my first story, I hope you enjoy it. If you like it please send me a note. Or you can post your comments here. Please vote!
I have always enjoyed sites like stories-online. Even though I can't afford to become a member, I feel I have trolled long enough that it is time to contribute. This story has not been posted anywhere else and I am not sure if it ever will be so stories-online is the only place you will find it.
I have always enjoyed sites like stories-online. Even though I can't afford to become a member, I feel I have trolled long enough that it is time to contribute. This story has not been posted anywhere else and I am not sure if it ever will be so stories-online is the only place you will find it.
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