Sorry!

Sorry for dropping out on you all. I was going to get the next chapter written soon after the last one. The delay is because I shut down my business and took a contract job in Iraq. After a couple of months training I am now in the middle of Iraq. I just got past my first month here and the money is great. I will get back to writing as soon as things settle down. I just got internet today after a month of nothing. Rest assured I will finish the story.

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Chapter 38 and 39

Chapters are out. I had to split it up as it was too big when I finished. Enjoy and sorry it took so long. Chapter 40 is going to set up for the next book. There is still plenty of story left to tell.

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Latest Chapters

Chapter 36 and 37 are out. I am currently working on 38 so please be patient. I will try to get it out ASAP. I had originally intended to have Bill and his daughter together in 36 but there was too much going on with the reunion that it was not feasible.

I will try to get them together in Chapter 38.

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Chapter 36 is alomst done.

Bill and Co are just an hour out from LA. I should have it finished up soon enough and the next chapter will be to set up the continuation of the series. I have not had as much time to write as before so chapters are coming slower than when I started. Sorry about that but real life comes first.

To those that sent emails of encouragement I say thanks. To those that chewed me out for "abandoning my story" as they put it, well you were wrong. I told you all I would not abandon it. It was just going to take a while.

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Final Chapters

As I am writing the final chapters of Rolling, I have come across some ideas to continue the story. I always knew that I would write more on the same story and now I have a great idea how I am going to continue. So those that like the story take heart, it will continue.

I am taking my time on the last chapters because I want to make sure that Bill's time with his daughter feels right. That and I want to make sure that I have the ending set up so that it can be taken as a stand alone story as well as a first book in a series.

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Finally Out

Ok, I finally got the next chapter out. Hope you enjoy it!

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Delayed

Sorry to be taking so long with the next chapter. I've been very busy and have not had the time to write. I will be writing this week. I hope so I can finish up the chapter I am working on.

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Gettng to LA and Beyond

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Chapter 31

It's finally out to post. It seems to be taking extra long for SOL to post it so be patient.

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Complaints

If any readers have a problem with an aspect of my story, I don't mind hearing from you about it. I learn that way. I have however, received an email that was crafted to try to insult my ability at writing.

This person was evidentially expecting some great literary work, when all I ever intended is a nice stroke story. If you like my story, please tell me. If you see a problem in grammar or spelling, or even some inconsistancy, please email me with it.

If however you just want to send an insult or trash my story because it isn't what you want, please just stop reading and don't bother me. If you must email me with it, at least point me to your finely crafted literary masterpiece. Otherwise keep it to yourself.

I don't mind criticism, I just don't like folks using that moniker to try to make others feel like shit.

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Rant over!

New Chapters Out

I just sent in Chapters 29 and 30. Hope you enjoy them. As always, I probably missed some spelling or grammatical errors. Please be kind and point them out to me. I need a quote and chapter as well as your correction. Thanks all.

I know some will complain about yet another character introduced into the story. Well she just happened to show up while I was writing. Remember I am just a typist here. The characters are in charge. Any complaints can be emailed to Sheri. You can get her email address from Chrissie. Be aware that Sheri likes to send nude pics of herself. You have been warned. Like you'd complain.

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Detail Details Details

So far I would say 99% of the readers have shown that they love my story. Until now, the only complaints are that it doesn't cum ...err, come fast enough, and that Bill should be the only one to get the girls. I have gotten a complaint about the level of detail I use. I will explain here why I do that.

First off, as a new writer I am still learning how to write. If I were writing a mainstream novel, I would suck. As a writer of erotica, I still suck, but I'm learning. The way this story is coming to me is like watching a TV show. I see the scene in my head and I write about it.

The level of detail I use is to get the reader to see what I do. When Bill places his hand on a breast, he feels it, so I detail that feeling. If he is getting ready to drive the RV, he has a routine he has to do before he can move it. Sure I could skip all that and let you, the reader assume that he did all of that, but in a day to day story such as this, we all do repetitive mundane things. That's life.

I hate to lose readers for any reason, but I like showing the details even though they may be tedious at times. If you don't like that, just skip to the sex parts if that is all you want out of a story. I confess I have done it while reading a few stories myself.

Sorry for the rant, I just feel the need to explain.

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Chapter 28

I will try to get Ch 28 out before the weekend. I've had no real time to write. That, and the fact that I was still not sure what to write. I guess an explanation is order on how I write.

I don't have any kind of plan or outline set up in this story. I write it as I see it. The last two chapters are a good example. The whole weekend had passed before it came to me how to approach the birthday party. It was late Sunday night before I started writing it. I had to finish it up Monday for publication. This chapter is going to be the same way. I tried to force it by just starting to write, but that didn't work. I think it is starting to flow again in my head, so I will try again tonight.

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Chapters 26-27

I find that smaller chapters are easier to handle thus I split this one in two. All through the weekend I had no clue what I wanted to do about the next chapter. I did know I wanted to have Niki and Sheri's birthday, yet the details eluded me. Sunday night at about 9pm I say down and the scene opened up to me and I wrote. I put down about a third of it before heading to bed. Monday was a dead workday so I wrote all day to hammer out what you have read. An hour for a quick once over and posted it. I hope you all enjoyed it. Now they will hopefully get back on the damn road!

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Chapter 24

Sorry for the delay on Ch 24. I wrote myself into a corner and have to rethink some things so this chapter will be delayed. I will try to get it up as soon as possible.

I make this promise that I will not abandon this story. I have read many great stories to only find they were never finished. I hate that. This one will be complete.

Chapter 23

As you may have seen at the end of chapter 23, it is dedicated to Gia1978. Even though she didn't show as much as most would like in her blog picture, what she did show is fabulous. I for one am inspired.

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Rewrite

Just did a rewrite of the first 6 chapters. Made corrections that I could find. If anyone sees anything I missed please quote it and tell me. Files have been submitted for posting.

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Sirloin Tip Roast

This is how I make it:

I get my roast from Wal-mart. I am not sure of the brand, just make sure it says Sirloin Tip.

Salt and spice to taste. Just make sure not to overdo the salt. The spice I use is called Carnival Seasons. It is made by the folks at Tony Chachere's. You can find the website here: http://www.tonychachere.com/ Any spice like Tony's is fine.

I use a Magnalite oval pot. sort of like a dutch oven. I pour some canola oil on the bottom. Maybe about 1/4 cup or less depending on the size of the roast. After the meat is spiced you roll it in the oil and place the pot cover on it.

Put it in the oven at about 375 degrees. I flip it every 45 minutes or so. Keep doing this until it turns dark, almost black. You will see a dark tar like residue on the sides of the pot. This can take a few hours depending on the oven. Chop up a large onion and put aside. When meat is dark as stated before, take it out of the oven and place it on the stove top at a medium heat. Pour in the chopped onions and sautéed them until they are wilted.

Add water to make a gravy. I usually start with about 1 1/2 cups of water and let it simmer, add more as needed. You can add some Kitchen Bouquet to it to darken if needed. The tar will melt into the water to make the gravy. I know that in certain parts of the country folks don't eat rice with gravy on it, but I do.

Hope you enjoy it as much as I do. If you have any questions email me.

Loss of readers

I have had a few readers state that they will no longer be reading my story. This, I am sorry to hear. The reasons all seem to be the same though, and that is what confuses me. I am trying to keep this story interesting in that there is a lot of sex between Bill and the women, yet he can't be the only one that the girls are interested in. Matt should be able to have some fun with the young stuff as well.

It's only natural that the younger kids feel some attraction to each other, and as such I am trying to avoid the formula incest storyline. Yes this is a story about an older guy in his RV who meets a family of women, yet it would seem to be following a standard formula to have him be the only one that gets all the girls. There has to be at least a bit of reality here.

There are stories out there that are like that. Hell, I like to read those too. It's just that I would like to have a more rounded tale. Have more character interaction. I hope that those that have stopped reading will come back to Bill and his story, but if not, oh well.

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Chapter 21

Just sent it in to be posted. This one wound up just a little short, but I kind of liked where it ended. Enjoy. Chapter 22 will more than likely be up before the weekend is out.

Requests by readers

I had received quite a few requests for water sports to be included in this story. It almost felt out of place in the shower scene. I may rewrite that chapter and omit the WS aspect. I think I have hit on that particular fetish enough for now. I will try to incorporate what I can of reader requests, if it isn't too far out there. Another request I've had, was for everyone to get pregnant. This is too far outside the scope of the story as it will more than likely not extend that far in the future. I may end the story leaving a possible opening for a sequel, we shall see.

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Sheri

Here is Sheri in a short skirt.

Niki

Here is Niki!

Michelle

This is one of the standard figures in Poser 6, but she makes a great Michelle for the story

Bill

This is as close as I can get using Poser 6 to what I think Bill looks like. Will post the others as I do them.

Chapter 12

Next chapter is out.

Repost

Chapter 9 was reposted to correct a few minor things I saw. If anyone see's an obvious mistake in any chapter please email me with the chapter and paragraph along with what you see wrong. I will fix it and repost.

Chapter 11

Just sent it in. Should be out for reading soon. Let me know if you all like the pace and how it is going so far.

Concerns about Chapter 10

I have received a few comments via email about the rape and murder mentioned when the story was centered on the Justice brothers. This was only intended to show how bad they are. I have no intention of expanding on what had occurred to the poor girl Ray had killed. I also am not going to detail any violence except for the confrontations that will occur when the Justice brothers get theirs. That will be the end of any violent part of the story.

I guess some background on Randy and his brother can be shown here. I was never going to explain this part in the story. In my head when I was trying to figure out Randy and his brother and why they were bad, I decided that their overbearing father had abused them. That, and not having a sympathetic ear from their mother, made it worse. I figured that Randy may have been beaten by him and caused his anger issues. No love from his mother caused him to hate women and treat them the way he did. This as I say was only in my head to allow me to figure him out before I added him to the story. Ray on the other hand was just a bad apple all around, he could do no wrong in his mother's eyes, thus he had her support for Sheriff and for Mayor. Bottom line is they are bad guys and some mention of what they did to be the bad guys was necessary.

I hope this clears up any concerns you have about this turning into a rape, murder story. It is not going to.

May be putting faces to the characters.

I have a program called Poser 6. It is a 3D animation type program. I may post pics of what I think the characters look like here. No they won't be naked. It will be just head or upper body shots, if I do it. If I can get the 3D figure in one of the pics of the RV that would be even better.

Chapter 10

It has been sent. This chapter spends some time with the Justice brothers. There are elements that I describe I am not going to expand on. Forcable rape, murder, and torture. These are for background only.

This story seems to be writing itself. I sit in front of the computer to write and it is almost like watching TV with editing capabilities. I see it as I type. I don't know where it is going but I can't wait to get there.

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Just to make it easier to visualize

What would you like to see?

This is for you the readers to post your thoughts about where you would like to see the story go. Perhaps some ideas on a character's development. Click on "comments" below this post and you can let us all know.

Where is it all going?

Some of the email I have received has asked as well as speculated on where I am going to go with this story. I have no idea, I just see the story unfold as I write. I type too fast to really take the time to see mistakes, so I have to go back several times to fix or change things.

I want to have Randy and his brother appear later. Obviously Beth and her son have entered the story, not sure where it is going yet, probably where you think. Not sure yet about her husband. This last chapter turned out just a little short due to my having to delete an entire section. I had gone in a direction I had changed my mind on. I found that after I had written about 1200 words, that Michelle was acting like a sex slave in waiting. I was reading an excellent story about that subject and was influenced.

There have been some requests for certain things to happen, as well as requests for certain character interactions. I am trying to incorporate a few of them so stay tuned.

I am hoping that some dialog will start among the readers using the comments section of this blog. Please feel free to post comments folks, that is why I set this up. I will have a post following this one to start that I hope.

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Chapter 9

I have just submitted it. Should be up soon. This one is a little shorter. I did not have time to get too much further and a good place to stop showed up.

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Chapter 8

Just submitted, it should be up soon. I have delved into Michelle's sister's life a little as she and her family will be a part of this story.

Editing

I do my own editing and proofreading. I also see I miss a lot of things. I may start using the services of a proofreader and editor. This I know will probably slow down submissions. I do want to get better at writing and add more to this story, as well as write others.

Chapter 7

Chapter 7 has been submitted, it should be up in a few minutes! Enjoy! I may do a few chapters this weekend.

Chapter 6

Just posted Chapter 6 of Good Times Rolling. Enjoy!

Re-write

I have completed re-writing the first 5 chapters of the story. This was to correct obvious misspelling, as well as the trouble I have with past tense and present tense writing. Small changes are also there to help the flow and enhance a few scenes. I will re-post it soon.

Even though I did the re-write, I still have written most of another chapter. I am going to try to keep them about the same length as chapter 5. I am almost there, so you should see an update this weekend or before.

The RV in Good Times Rolling

The RV is a Travel Supreme motorized Select Limited, I used floor plan 45SL24 for the layout I use to plan the interior action of the story. You can link directly here:

http://www.travelsupreme.com/product_page.php?product=10

From here you can select gallery to see pictures I use for reference. Select floor plans and scroll down until you see 45SL24. for the layout.

I hope this helps you to visualize a little better as the story progresses. Much of it will happen in the RV.

Annonymous posters

I will no longer accept annonymous posts. I have had some great feedback but have no way to reply. So If you have some good feedback please post it on this blog or get a yahoo or gmail email account so I can reply.

Good Times Rolling

This is my first story, I hope you enjoy it. If you like it please send me a note. Or you can post your comments here. Please vote!

I have always enjoyed sites like stories-online. Even though I can't afford to become a member, I feel I have trolled long enough that it is time to contribute. This story has not been posted anywhere else and I am not sure if it ever will be so stories-online is the only place you will find it.